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Black Wings Beating

Rayaan S. | Sep.29.2020 | Rough Draft

Introduction

Immerse yourself in the world of the Six Villages, as Brysen and Kylee struggle to capture the most prized eagle—the ghost eagle—at the brink of war. Brysen and Kylee are the main characters of Black Wings Beating, who overcome many struggles in their land—the six villages—to try to achieve their goals. This book should be read by everyone—and will appeal especially those who enjoy realistic fiction and are intrigued by birds of prey because the novel takes place in a fictional but realistic setting and the entire novel circulates around surreal birds-of-prey.

Important Parts of the Story

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Why will people who enjoy fiction and birds be entertained by this novel?

Black Wings Beating takes place in a fictional setting, but still has some realistic elements to it. For example, the characters of the story are normal humans, and there are normal elements such as houses and mountains present. At the same time there are also surreal elements to the story that does not happen in real life. For example, in chapter three, chapter twelve, chapter twenty-three, and other places throughout the story, Kylee communicates to birds of prey by saying “Shyehnaah”—something that cannot occur in reality. People that are interested in birds of prey should also read this novel because the entire novel revolves around them. Birds of prey are what the economy, religion, and livlihood of the Six Villages is based on. Brysen and Kylee’s father dies while trying to capture a ghost eagle. There is a variety of fictional and realistic birds of prey in this story which will entertain those interested in birds.

What is the purpose of this novel?

This novel was written with the primary intention of entertaining the audience. There are many items in the novel that demonstrate this, such as the use of fictional and surreal elements as well as the nature of the plot of the novel. For example, the ghost eagle—the most important bird of prey in the story—does not exist in real life. Instead this bird is entirely fictional and killed many people in the story. The author included this fictional bird with surreal characteristics to make the story more entertaining. The reader is more likely to be entertained by a fictional ferocious and deadly bird than a bird that actually exists but is not as violent. The development of the plot is another characteristic of the story that reflects the author’s purpose. A large part of the story is dedicated to introducing the characters in great detail. Introducing the characters in great detail demonstrates that the author wants the reader to understand the characters and their behavior. For example, the author describes an instance of Brysen and Shara fighting the Orphan Maker and his bird to help the reader understand Brysen’s behavior when trying to capture the ghost eagle. This, in turn, makes the story more entertaining because the audience can understand the feelings of the main character.

Who are the characters and what are they motivated by?

The main characters of this story are Brysen and his sister Kylee. Brysen strives to become a successful falconer, while Kylee rejects falconry and wants to escape from it. These personality traits are exhibited throughout the story. For example, Brysen eagerly recieves lessons on falconry and boldly participates in fights with birds. Brysen is proud of his accomplishments with birds and openly demonstrates this throughout the story. On the other hand, Kylee despises falconry but is forced to stay in the business of falconry to pay off her father’s debts. Also, Kylee does not exhibit as much pride and becomes ashamed whenever she does so. For example, when she saved Brysen against the Orphan Maker, she kept the accomplishment low key. Overall, the two main characters have stark differences in personality. There are also minor characters, such as Goryn Tamir, who oppose Kylee and Brysen. Goryn is motivated by the power, and seizes every opportunity to become more powerful. There are other minor characters that help Brysen and Kylee, such as Nyall. Nyall is a friend of Brysen and Kylee and is motivated by friendship.

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Conflict

As with any novel, there are multiple conflicts that occur throughout the story that help advance the plot. Here are two examples. One example of conflict is in chapter 2 of the story Brysen struggles to fight The Orphan Maker. Brysen starts bleeding and continually gets harmed until the Orphan Maker is about to slit his throat. At this point, Kylee says “Shyehnaah” which caused Shara, Brysen’s bird, to hit the Orphan Maker and cause him to lose control of Brysen. In the end, Brysen was saved by Kylee. Another example of conflict (on a smaller scale) is in chapter 5, in which Brysen and Kylee argue with each other about who should talk to Nyall. The disagreement turns into physical conflict, and Kylee unintentionally harms Brysen. This causes Brysen to leave the mews. As time passes, Brysen forgives Kylee and this conflict is forgotten.

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Image of Main characters

The figure to the left depicts Kylee and the one on the right depicts Brysen.

Depiction Of Main Characters

This image also depicts the main characters. Brysen is the figure holding the bird.

Related Image

This image highlights the story's focus around birds and depicts the main characters.

Book Cover

The cover of this book contains a plethora of black-winged birds—a central focus of the book. Hence the title Black Wings Beating.

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Like the Book? Explore the Series

This book comes in a three part series. Hover over each image to learn more.

Black Wings Beating

This is the first part of the series.
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Red Skies Falling

This is the next part of the series—a continuation of Black Wings Beating.
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Gold Wings Rising

This is the final part of the series and was just recently released.
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Review of Black Wings Beating
"A ferocious fantasy world coupled with two formidable protagonists, Black Wings Beating is a heart-pounding story that lures readers deep into the high-stakes tradition of falconry, and challenges them to examine what they'd be willing to do in order to protect those they love. Stunning and arresting; a must-read." - Dhonielle Clayton, author of The Belles and the Tiny Pretty Things series

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